licking my teeth

vendredi, septembre 24, 2004

show me something lonely
show me something i can hold in my hand
show me something i can throw
show me something i can crush

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonyme said...

as i understand how much it sucks to sit there and come up with a poem and have the courage to put it up in front of everyone and then have no one say a damned thing about it... i forced myself to comment on this poem. its very short, but if it were any longer it would suck pretty much. to me it captures the essence of that moment where youre just like looking for some sort of answer to comfort you and you dont really know what it is youre looking for, but youre looking for it anyway.

11:55 PM

 

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